I love how people can literally deflect any criticism with porn logic nonsense. Like, we can't actually point out some badly done parts of the story or game because it's a lowbrow porn comic quality work in a porn site.
This site has well-written and quality porn games, you know. You can't deflect any criticism with that short of nonsense forever.
This, why can't you have a good well written story and the porn?
If you do not say anything then the authors think it's all good as long as the pictures are good.
This story could be so much better as myself and many other have said. The fact anyone takes time to say so shows they think the story could be great. It's up to the Devs to take into account what is being said and improve their writing.
It shouldn't only be about the pretty pictures, some of us do like a good well thought out story.
Take some time go back and fix the story to make more sense, be proud of what you do and don't half ass it.
People saying she was alone and under pressure, well...
Let's look at a timeline.
She is an elite agent trained to deal with high stress situations being an assassin.
From the Dev's own description:
Your wife, Clara, the most beautiful woman you had ever set eyes upon and an elite secret agent, is by your side, but the waters are treacherous.
Both of you are tasked to infiltrate a powerful company as spies along with your intern, Anna.
Let me tell you, she is not even near your side from the start, she hides everything from you and the team.
Now the timeline:
Day one fucks husband after work.
Day two not much happened, event with code.
Day three goes out with husband and theater event happens. I think she cums from getting eaten out and fingered.
Day four not much happens, story events.
Day five again more story.
Day six, sees husband in a kiss with Anna, doesn't question it. Falls on her back and fucks Leon over that.
All those days, the husband can come over and visit and spend time with her.
Day seven tells husband he can't come over anymore. (no red flags there)
Day eight see a picture from Leon as he visits her in middle of night, again. Picture is her husband grabbing Anna's tit. Sex between Leon and Clara ONLY if Alan tries to spy on her. But that sex Leon can't put it in at all. Any other choice Leon gets kicked out.
So, with in about a week, this elite secret agent is so stressed she just abandons her real team over someone she doesn't know (Leon). She fucks Leon over a kiss and hides everything from a team she's been working with for 5 years as if she doesn't trust them?
Yeah...
, unless of course your doing a rewrite of the early story.
