VN - Ren'Py - Our Secret: Price of the Forbidden Wishes [v0.4] [17MOONKEYS]

How Long To Beat: 30 - 60 minutes

A short, concise story between a mother and son in a haunted house.

There's really just one scene and it isn't animated. However, there is good sound design, the writing is straightfoward and succinct, and the renders are nice.

I'm not the biggest fan of the mom's character model. She's a grounded MILF design: curvy, big tits, thick thighs, natural belly. Not unattractive, but I tend to like a slightly more idealized face.

It doesn't do anything extraordinary, but it does what it does solidly.

RECOMMENDED. It can be played in one sitting, shows potential for the developer, and is nice for Halloween / spooky season.

Pros: Top notch graphics 10/10

Cons:
Language differences make for a difficult conversation
Conversation is awkward in several ways
Too much of the color Red

For help with the dialogue feel free to contact me - I used to write fiction

Releases demo that has less content than first version to then try and ask you for $20 to buy steam version as its about to get to good part from first version, literally worse than internet going down as youre about to climax wtf is this shit

A bad Demo, no sex, no story, no character development, just an older milf that you DON'T fuck.

This is an obvious ploy to try and get people to go buy the full version, but the 'demo' is so bad I can't see any success on that front.

Friends, just say no and move on. Hundreds of better VNs here to meet your kink that aren't scams.

I'm baffled how this has such a high rating. This "demo" is about 2 minutes of content. The story makes no sense. There really is no story. "We're at this house. Hey Aunt, can I call you mom? Hey mom, let's sleep naked. I'm going to have sex with you now. The end."

I found the "completed" 1.0 version, and it's about 4 minutes of content. I'm not one to make accusations, but it's monumentally strange that this demo has 52 pages of comments, 29 reviews, such a high rating, 2 minutes of the total 4 minutes of total game content, and there's just nothing there.

This is reselling previously published free game.
Developer decided to try to sell game that was here presented as free game.
Price is 19 $
Avoid!
Other than that I enjoyed the game but this developer attitude is just horrible.

Honestly it's pretty average right now. It doesn't do anything new or better than other renpy games. The busty milf is in my opinion the only positive. I understand that you are still at the beginning of the game so i'm still hopeful for what's to come. Personally I wouldn't mind if you added some interracial NTR to spice things up (you could just make it optional if you don't want it to be a main part of the story).

(Review for v0.2)

This is a little horror game with you and your aunt in a house on the country, and some strange things happening as it was to be expected.

Both the MC and aunt are models from UFO. No sex to talk about yet, but the way the story goes it is clearly about to happen. Looking good so far, it's a simple game gearing towards having sex with your aunt in the next update.

It starts off strong. An intriguing premise, a decent horror setup, and then the writer gets bored and just makes it porn. Basically this game starts out like a slow-burn. You've got to seduce your mom and circumstances either help or hinder that. But then the second you kiss your mom for the first time, it's just straight to fucking.

First off, I have to thank this game for blending horror and arousal so effectively that it left me both terrified and turned on. It truly hosts some chilling supernatural events, though it's a short play. The adult content is sufficient for its length and features a classic incest storyline. I recommend it for a one-night fap session; the mix of horror will surely spice up your evening

Good pacing, story has enough for a VN of this length without dragging. Build up is good and character's don't act stupid and throw themselves at each other straight away. Disapointing you cannot find many other VNs these days that just do the basics right without adding in any needless bits that add nothing.

Ok, this is actually a surprise for me to vote max score for a game here, but here we are!

The story is short ended, but has a big potential in it. I believe if someone make it good this far he have all skills and chances to do it right!

I like the spooke part. but it feels kinda week without more actions from doll. And interactions between aunt and MC is little bit lacking. They should stay at least one week in old house, making last preparations there before leaving (more suggestions in comment section). Anim's needed more animations and sounds, but despite this they are good in this state!

Not much to say here, but i like it! Keep it up bro, you can do it!

As with other games by the same developer, the quality is great. The renders are better than 99% of games out there.

As with other games by the same developer, it's abandon-ware. They *really* like to start games that lead nowhere and then just abandon them on a cliffhanger less than 30 min in.

Has some funny meta jokes. Pretty good atmosphere with all the SFX.

this game has absolutely zero content it's a five minute fast forward game, incoherent. no attractive women at all. what were you thinking? this isn't a game. Come on man. games have choices this doesn't.

Perverted spirits help a son and mother become lovers, and that spooky doll from RE7 that sounds like Marine grants wishes.

So short, but so good. 3D models were on point, the mom was nice and mature with some good classic "mommy" energy. The son knows what he wants, and is willing to enlist the help of some spirits (both alcoholic and non) in his pursuit to burry his salami inside mother dearest.

Now the horror vibe is a little on the light side, but it's still pretty present. This isn't a Resident Evil style blood and gore, but something more akin to Silent Hill but without any of the obvious monsters. It's creepy, and that's the best kind of horror in my opinion.

A darn shame this ended up in the Oh Hold shelf, where many a good start have landed and never saw the light of progression again.

Our Secret [Complete] - Spoilers/Summary

Too bad. This VN was a short read, but it showed a lot of promise. The story is that you and your "step-aunt" are out to take photos of an old, family home when a storm hits. Panic ensues as the aunt worries about potential boonies lunatics breaking-and-entering, so it's up to you to comfort her. How? By wishing upon a creepy doll so that your aunt will fuck you.

The horror elements of this game are actually surprisingly well done, hence the 2 stars. Unfortunately, the rest of it is little more than a tech demo. There's one scene where you please your aunt with a dildo, then you both return to your mother's home--who you are also in a relationship with--and that's that. The end.

Don't waste your time with what could have been. Go read and jerk off to something else.

I don't know how anyone with a conscience can call this complete. If it was labeled "part 1 complete" maybe. This dev is using this as a demo to then try to sell the rest of it.
Content wise it's really standard fair with a good well used model but really boring dialogue.
I also think some of the tags are misleading.
Overall if really bored play it. It's a ok 10 minutes. So was hoping for more with this.

Biggest pros is the ART ! It's facking great, this guy can make amazing renders for sure, the MILFs are just outstanding ! <3

Biggest dowside of this game is the lenght of it. I felt kinda sad reaching the end screen from one click to another
The night could have been longer with more build up to the most awaited scene. Even during the scene dialogues could have been a little more polished, it feels like some questions/answers are kinda akward since we don't really have a context to it (don't wanna spoil so I know this can be confusing if you didnt play it).
This looks like a one-shot story made to try things out maybe ? Even if I feel sad about some things, I'm really glad this game is completed !

Anyway, I recommend playing it, you won't use much time and I'm pretty sure you'll like it if you like this genre, of course.

I discovered the dev's work by playing UFO, which I love very much, but like many others I'm waiting for the next update
So go try his games, it's totally worth it !

Thank you 17MOONKEYS for making this nice game, and thank you F95 for sharing it ! <3

Much love <3

Good proof of concept, now go make a game.
Quite honestly I liked the aunt model, but I'm old & jaded & wouldn't kick her out of bed.
If you're interested in watching 1 sex scene & getting teased with what the dev was hinting at, then dropped, use your bandwidth to DL this and set aside 5-10 minutes. If not? "move along sir, nothing to see here"

This is not even "short" game.
There's nothing interactive.
Story is not make sense. What is "aunt in law"?
Generic Daz models with bad lighting.
CC0 soundtracks which we heard 100's of times.

I'm giving one star because I can't rate zero...