Game good
Writing and pacing are quite off. Slow start and rushed end (as of day 9, and especially because of the time-skip vision). Also, why tell me MC wants to find a job and set his life up and then have him spend 9 days idling about? At least set things up so they can have a payoff later, hopefully in the form of a meaningful story choice that might open some options (kinky scenarios and character development) while closing some others.
Renders are good despite some technical issues during the earlier days. Spicy scenes are pretty well set up and animated. And character designs are cute and sexy, which is my kryptonite.
Character writing and motivations is also weirdly written, but has some charm to it, and some nice character development. For example, Starr (colorful chick) wants to become a streamer to help you pay rent, which I find good character development, as well as an excellent setup for some later payoff . Despite this Luna (goth chick) seems a bit underdeveloped, despite an interesting scene playing out in one of the later chapters. Quite the shame, since she's my favorite character, but I just can't really get a clear picture of her wants and needs. I feel like the guardian angel/demon don't add much to the story, and aren't particularly funny. For the rest of the cast though, when the humor lands it lands it lands good.
As far as game-play goes, I hate kinetic novels, and at this point the game plays almost exactly like one. I would love it for there to be more meaningful choices, maybe in order to have an effect on what kinks each of the girls end up getting into in the future.
The kinks are splendid. Some of the hottest stuff I've seen in on this website. Large insertions, hole expansion, deep throathing, belly bulging. I can't say enough praise, and I'd love if anyone could point me in the way of more games of this sort.
As I said though, even if Starr being a butt slutt is some fun contrast for the character, Luna is the one I'm more interested in seeing in those position. As I said, having a choice system where you can choose which kink path each girl goes down on would somewhat attenuate this and give some replayability value to an otherwhise fairly linear story.
Overall, decent game. Excellent game by my own very biased standards, given the fetishes. I'll look into supporting the developer whenever I get a good chance.
Writing and pacing are quite off. Slow start and rushed end (as of day 9, and especially because of the time-skip vision). Also, why tell me MC wants to find a job and set his life up and then have him spend 9 days idling about? At least set things up so they can have a payoff later, hopefully in the form of a meaningful story choice that might open some options (kinky scenarios and character development) while closing some others.
Renders are good despite some technical issues during the earlier days. Spicy scenes are pretty well set up and animated. And character designs are cute and sexy, which is my kryptonite.
Character writing and motivations is also weirdly written, but has some charm to it, and some nice character development. For example, Starr (colorful chick) wants to become a streamer to help you pay rent, which I find good character development, as well as an excellent setup for some later payoff . Despite this Luna (goth chick) seems a bit underdeveloped, despite an interesting scene playing out in one of the later chapters. Quite the shame, since she's my favorite character, but I just can't really get a clear picture of her wants and needs. I feel like the guardian angel/demon don't add much to the story, and aren't particularly funny. For the rest of the cast though, when the humor lands it lands it lands good.
As far as game-play goes, I hate kinetic novels, and at this point the game plays almost exactly like one. I would love it for there to be more meaningful choices, maybe in order to have an effect on what kinks each of the girls end up getting into in the future.
The kinks are splendid. Some of the hottest stuff I've seen in on this website. Large insertions, hole expansion, deep throathing, belly bulging. I can't say enough praise, and I'd love if anyone could point me in the way of more games of this sort.
As I said though, even if Starr being a butt slutt is some fun contrast for the character, Luna is the one I'm more interested in seeing in those position. As I said, having a choice system where you can choose which kink path each girl goes down on would somewhat attenuate this and give some replayability value to an otherwhise fairly linear story.
Overall, decent game. Excellent game by my own very biased standards, given the fetishes. I'll look into supporting the developer whenever I get a good chance.