The story in this game is absolutely atrocious. You can literally only play it one way and if you try to deviate from the path it sets you right back on it.The writing isn't worse than most games on this site (especially shit like Milf City, a wife and mother, dating my daughter, WVM etc.), in fact I would say its better than those games and other popular ones. Obviously its not as good as in Being a DIK but that's a very high bar.
Overall it's a fun game with lots of great girls and good pacing. Seems weird to nitpick this game apart as if adult games have some high standard of writing lol
"Want puss?"
"Fight for puss"
"No Fight? Get beat up"
"Want puss"
"Fight for puss"
"No Fight? Get beat up"
Rinse and repeat.
And you can't play as the smart guy who only uses violence when necessary, nu uh not in this game, you gotta be the alpha male because that's what all the girls want. Gotta win the tournaments, join the frats, take out the big dawg and become the big dawg. The girls only care about your status on campus and if your not being aggressive in every "encounter" your getting your ass beat, there is no middle ground.
Now maybe its changed, haven't played in quite a few updates but it seemed very hollow and a worse version of that "other" game.