ename144

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Not sure if my mind in completely blanking out right now but...who is Grace? I mean there are a ton of minor and side characters like Dalia, Nicolette, Harper, Sophia, etc. etc. but the name Grace rings zero bells and her name does not come up a single time in the game's guide at all.
Grace is Killian's mom. The MC had a crush on her growing up. It's implied he still has a thing for her, but so far it only really comes up if you don't hook up with Hana after her big date.
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Dark479

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Grace is Killian's mom. The MC had a crush on her growing up. It's implied he still has a thing for her, but so far it only really comes up if you don't hook up with Hana after her big date.
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Thanks for the reminder. I literally only saw her once in the game so far and completely forgot her name. I mean I did remember the whole event but only remembered her as Ian's mom, completely forgot her name.
 

GMDominance

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Not sure if my mind in completely blanking out right now but...who is Grace? I mean there are a ton of minor and side characters like Dalia, Nicolette, Harper, Sophia, etc. etc. but the name Grace rings zero bells and her name does not come up a single time in the game's guide at all.
If I recall correctly, Grace is Killian's mom
 

tuff_luvr

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Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better
 

Dr. Mick

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Have question was MCs mom once apart of the organization he works for.
Not that we know of.
She did some porn when she was younger, to pay the bills as a single mom, but nothing in years.
To our knowledge she's never worked for the club or organization where the MC works, unless the company she did porn shoots for had some connection. We don't know enough about that past to say for certain, but she doesn't have any current connection.
 
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Fapparition

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Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better
I actually find pleasure in the way writer choosing their words. To have an open dictionary while wading through meticulously crafted sentences might be somewhat grueling, yet one should not disregard the irrefutable positive effect this kind of spelling inflict. I hope you will be able to reconsider your deplorable stand and bask with us in cordial felling those words provide.
 

Idontplay

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Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better
Actually I think the dialogues are pretty simple; simple at a middle school level. I suppose this is due to the fact we went to different schools.
 

dolfe67

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MC's thoughts/narrator's lines are quite wordy with elevated language indeed. I don't remember if dialogues are too. But yeah some characters wouldn't speak with that kind of language, being whores or criminal. But the patrons and Chuck/Kat could.
 

Ass prefer

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Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better
I completely agree with you. Although, at times, I liked this attempt at intelligence.
 

ffive

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MC's thoughts/narrator's lines are quite wordy with elevated language indeed. I don't remember if dialogues are too. But yeah some characters wouldn't speak with that kind of language, being whores or criminal. But the patrons and Chuck/Kat could.
Hey now, criminals and whores can be pretty articulate and educated, too. For that matter both Chuck and Kat are criminals but still know words with more than three syllables. And Edwin's mother was a whore, didn't prevent her from enjoying Italian cinema.
 

Dark479

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Have question was MCs mom once apart of the organization he works for.
While the game does not specify what kind of arrangement she had or who she worked for while in porn it is very unlikely she worked for the club because we know the club has only existed for five years. But it might turn out she worked for some of the current member/s of the club if any of them were doing porn before the club was created...but we don't know if that is the case or whether any of them were doing porn before the club.
 
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Ass prefer

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Hey now, criminals and whores can be pretty articulate and educated, too. For that matter both Chuck and Kat are criminals but still know words with more than three syllables. And Edwin's mother was a whore, didn't prevent her from enjoying Italian cinema.
on the other hand, this is not some kind of brothel, but a kind of elite club for the cream of society, so in this context, the fact that they are so eloquent is justified. Maybe
 

Dark479

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Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better
The game sure does love using big words, that's for damn sure. I have had to look up words a few times while playing this words. But it does not annoy me that much.
 

Dark479

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We know that August was involved in porn production before, and Edwin even asks his mother if she's heard of that man, but she seems to be unfamiliar with him.
Though if she did she would probably not tell the MC. I am curious where this story will go. The MC's mom heavily suspects even if she doesn't know and I am still extremely suspicious of Kathleen's intentions as she went to talk to the MC's mom...I would not put it beyond that sadistic cunt to drag mom into club some way or another(probably as some kind of guest as this doesn't seem to be the type of game that will have incest) and bring her face to face with her son there. Though now there is also the tape of the MC with Rosalind where she does say his name once too...that will almost certainly come back to bite MC in the ass.
 
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The MC's mom heavily suspects even if she doesn't know and I am still extremely suspicious of Kathleen's intentions as she went to talk to the MC's mom...I would not put it beyond that sadistic cunt to drag mom into club some way or another
Idk about that, doing something like that seems counterproductive - Edwin is part of the 'staff', not a Carnation, so mistreating him for no reason only creates resentment and a desire for revenge. I'd want my employees happy or at least content with their status, rather than plotting to ruin everything behind my back.
 

bo77om

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hmmm, I remembered something that TD mentioned somewhere in dev diary around May that they were going to "smut up a side girl that we wanted for two years now".

any guesses from y'all who that might be? or do we already have an answer who's that mystery SG?
 
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