Domiek

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While I hate to disagree with the actual Dev of this fine VN, there is ZERO point making a post in the thread announcing "the game is crap so I won't play it". Why the hell anyone would put energy in to being that negative is beyond me...
It's a forum for discussing games, and although it may not feel great for devs to read negative criticism, it's still the correct place to do it. Of course it's preferable to see comments specifying what they don't like, feedback is still feedback.

As long as no one shits on Gary. He's my heart, my soul, my hot piece of ass. I'll ban anyone who says otherwise.
 

HornyyPussy

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It's a forum for discussing games, and although it may not feel great for devs to read negative criticism, it's still the correct place to do it. Of course it's preferable to see comments specifying what they don't like, feedback is still feedback.

As long as no one shits on Gary. He's my heart, my soul, my hot piece of ass. I'll ban anyone who says otherwise.
Constructive criticism is one thing and most dev's welcome it, whining about about a game sucking and being unplayable is quite another.....

And Gary RULES! (agree or the turd shank comes out!)
 

TigerWolfe

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There is a "parody" tag in the forums https://f95zone.to/sam/latest_alpha/#/cat=games/page=1/tags=505 the game has no "parody" tag. End of discussion
Because it's not technically a parody, a parody requires you to emulate a specific work. It is a satire because it is poking fun at an entire genre... Labeling this a parody would be wrong because people would expect it to be a horny version of some other piece of media. It is however a satire which means it's poking fun at the entire incest genre and so isn't serious in the least.
 

FearlessBOB

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I'm just expressing my honest view, nothing personal, man. Thank you for your efforts, and I must say that "Personal Trainer" was really entertaining.
Calm down man, you're gonna pop an aneurysm if you keep going like this!

Fine, you don't like this game. You could just ignore it, but you posted like 8 messages about how bad the plot is... It's a porn game, ffs! Porn-game logic is well established by now. Nobody wanna read Dostoevsky when they are trying to fap.

Go rave on a thread about the last 6 years of MCU movies, or the Disney reboot of Star Wars, if you want to rave about massive plot-holes..

I like nice, warm, wet holes, preferably attached to a hot, young, tight female, when I play pron games, and that's why I like this, and 'Personal Trainer', and I'm not gonna say no to a nice curvy milf eighter!
 

MaxRichard

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Hey all you cool cats and kittens. The game isn't for everyone, no need to argue.




You're not wrong, especially the early renders of Raya do have some interesting eyes. The others are not wrong to point out that it's a satire of the incest genre, although this is the first time I've went out and said as much. The plot is absolutely ridiculous, although I don't think it's any more ridiculous than Personal Trainer or most other games on here. If you were put off by the annoying shit MC, weird eyes or simply stopped playing early on, it can be easy to not follow along with the story and miss key points that should satisfy even some of the sillier plot points.

You're absolutely right to think the game is stupid and unplayable. Nothing wrong with that. I went into this knowing that it will be an either "hate it or love it" type of game. Maybe I'm just immature, but I do find myself constantly giggling like a schoolgirl when I write or even replay older scenes. The MC is like the mentally stunted little brother that I never drowned.
I fucking love this game, FWIW. And from this forum I know I'm not alone. Keep up the good work!

 

SonsOfLiberty

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Another productive couple of weeks. Everything going more or less fine with only minor hiccups. For example, my batch render software would randomly freeze up overnight and I woke up to the office being 20 degrees hotter than the rest of the flat. This seems to be fixed now.

I purchased a 24mm wide lens and a classic 65mm portrait one for my camera on my birthday last month. With it, I've taken my first step into trying to learn the basics of photography, composition and working with contrasts in colors and lighting to take interesting photos. I'm still an absolute beginner but it's a fun hobby that still directly ties back into work as a game dev.

What I've noticed is that since I don't have the luxury of zooming to find a good shot, I have to walk around to get a good frame. I was curious to see how this translates to the digital world. From my experiments over the last couple of weeks, I've noticed that these limitations force me to think more about the framing and composition of the shot than I have before. I've began limiting the renders to use only 24mm and 65mm camera lenses.

This may all be placebo effect as some way to justify spending the money on the camera gear, but I think I'm already seeing improvements in renders. The shots seem more cohesive as the renders are no longer some random focal length across a wide range. On top of the cohesion, when the framing changes, it seems to now have more of a purpose rather than "eh, looks good like this I guess". This also provides the benefit of spending less time on framing and constantly adjusting everything for every single render. I hope to continue developing my understanding and abilities and pray this translates to better and faster renders.

I've also began focusing more on the shot than the environment. Previously, I would try to setup elements of the environment, including lighting and props, in a way that would make sense in real life. However, real life is boring so that's probably not the best way to go. I now find myself rearranging props and changing lighting just for the shot. I hope none of you actually start comparing renders trying to find inconsistencies lol.

Chapter 5 actually has a scene that was rewritten to include MC moving his office desk from up against the wall to a more visually pleasing location. A secretary desk right next to the bosses door may make sense in real life but Christ those renders came out so flat and boring. Don't worry, I've made the scene ridiculous and entertaining so you won't be forced to just watch some guy moving his desk around.

Till next time,
Dom
 

keefer43

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Dec 24, 2019
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Hey all you cool cats and kittens. The game isn't for everyone, no need to argue.




You're not wrong, especially the early renders of Raya do have some interesting eyes. The others are not wrong to point out that it's a satire of the incest genre, although this is the first time I've went out and said as much. The plot is absolutely ridiculous, although I don't think it's any more ridiculous than Personal Trainer or most other games on here. If you were put off by the annoying shit MC, weird eyes or simply stopped playing early on, it can be easy to not follow along with the story and miss key points that should satisfy even some of the sillier plot points.

You're absolutely right to think the game is stupid and unplayable. Nothing wrong with that. I went into this knowing that it will be an either "hate it or love it" type of game. Maybe I'm just immature, but I do find myself constantly giggling like a schoolgirl when I write or even replay older scenes. The MC is like the mentally stunted little brother that I never drowned.
He's a fucking GENIUS!
 
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